Storyboard Sequence from "Heart of Darkness"

These are boards I did for BFA from the book "Heart of Darkness" which is about a captain of a steamer, Marlow, who goes into the congo in search of a station manger, Mr. Kurtz, who has gone crazy. In this particular scene, as they travel closer to Mr. Kurtz's station, his steamer gets ambushed by the natives who are trying to protect and prevent them from reaching and taking away Mr. Kurtz. As I look at them now, there are changes I would make in the placement of some of the boards to create more anticipation and more interesting storytelling.